Patrick Sharp

The first thing that I read was the blog about the young mothers at different universities. Conceptually, the thesis was hard to understand. They spoke about breastfeeding and different aspects of motherhood, but never spoke about what could be done for it. For the...

Michael Roenick

First I watched the video Orphan Trains  by Christine Frewin. The Conceptual core of this video is well thought out. But I feel the introduction could be a little stronger. I say this because it goes into too much detail about how she found out about the orphan...

Lexi Levine

For my first peer review I listened to the podcast, “Not the ‘Right’ Kind of Gay”. The thesis was strong. He believed he was not perceived as being the ‘right’ type of gay. Throughout the podcast he talks about him being feminine...

Laura Smith

First, I watched the video “Urban Art vs Vandalism” by Summer Tappmeyer. https://digitalstorytelling.coe.uh.edu/view_story.cfm?vid=484&otherid=featured&d_title=Featured%20Digital%20Stories The conceptual core of this blog was relatively strong. The central...

Nicolas Newry

For my first peer review essay, I have chosen to read What did I learn at private school? They should be abolished and I want to provide the necessary comments for him to improve upon his writing. After reading, I have noticed that Satow’s thesis could use some...

Matthew Murphy

I think in the radio show “America for someone like me” I feel like the video really achieved someone writing couldn’t the audio enhances it a lot. You hear the way her voice gets so exited when she talks about her family back in Africa it and you...
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